write more
oh dear. i don't want to be harsh,so that is all i'm going to say...... oh dear.
OH MY GOD can you people be ANY more cruel? no its not perfect but what book is? not even published books are perfect theres not one published book that i have read thats perfect so omg at least she put a book up on here i bet some of you dont have the guts to do so. and how would YOU feel if she wrote crap about your stuff uh? you wouldnt like it so get of those horse of yours cuz you arent mary F***ing popins damn next time... mehr anzeigen
dont put writing on ur list of careers
i agree with minstone its like a ten yr old wrote this book and the sad part is that some-no most ten yr olds can do better than this, bad book