luvd it btwxx

i loved your book could you please read mine and tell me if you like it, its my first time on this website when i wrote it,so it was kinda like a practice write,my family told me they liked it but i kinda want to no from a really good writer and have to say you are good :) thanx

i love your book you should write more they are great

and james sounds awesome

hey is there a book 2

thanks kariluvbunny7 that means alot:)

omg u know the comment u gave jenbella1112 the book she made lovely bella well NO ONE CARES ABOUT SPELLING OR GRAMMER THE PART THAT MATTERS IS THE STORY AND U R SO MEAN TO HER U SAID TO GET A PARENT OR A TEACHER TO HELP HER WITH SPELLING SHE IS 13 MAYBE SHE KNOWS HOW TO SPELL

its a fun story to read

I hope you will win
Good luck
renesmee87

hi the story until know reading is good. And it is a good story.
greetings
Lucky

I am reading as many of the entries in the contest as I can. I admire your effort, but you really need to go back and correct all your grammatical mistakes. "I" should be capitalized. Perhaps you could get a teacher or parent to help you. All the best.