sorry for the miss spelling and blank pages im still writing and the pc messes the words around:[

I admire your writing at such an early age. What is with half the book being blank? Your skills can only improve as you move along in life and learn the requirements.

Great

what i mannaged 2 read was very gd but after so many blanck pages it just repeated it self from the accidant

Why are so many empty sides there? After page 18.

I admire your enthusiasm to write at a very young age. But I agree with shobana that you need to review your spelling and grammar. You have a good story concept. You still got my vote. Good luck!

VERY GOOD! I hope you will win! :)

your story is quite nice. I don't really like Twilight, so I was skeptic at first, but your story turned out to be different indeed. so, good job!, especially considering your young age ^^

I read the book again,it is a deep fiction...

Thank you to the people who have given me a star or a vote your helping me alot:)