Please write the rest of the story, i'm very excited what will be happen.

oh so its not finished thats why it would not go past page 12

um to be honest i was reading your book before you sent me the comment i just was sooo bored i had to read my favorite book nice job.

omg this is so perfect

thanks for the comments about my book!:]

love it

I love this story!!!
Ariee

thank you if you like my book so far im still writing hope you like it

very intresting

it is still not finished sorry