I loved this! it was great cant wait for the other chapters!

OMSU! (oh my so unicorn xD) That was amazingg writeee more pleaseeeeee :D xx

bloody hell.. it's just so good!
hope there're going to be more chapters soon :)

Very good book, I really liked it alot.

nice! i want to read more!

hey this is awesome.can you please put on the other chapters as well.it was very good to read.

amazing book, but where can i find MORE?!

WoW. Great book, couldn't stop reading.

It was really good! I loved it :)

i thought these opening chapters were great. i want to read on and find out what happens. writing vampire stories can be risky. there is so much out there which means your material has to be fresh, which this is. good work :)