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Jack, this is what I've come to expect of your writing, and you haven't let me down. This is a really funny story, and great writing, out of the Top Drawer.

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indie23

I felt still felt sorry for the frog in the end though.:(

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lazarus67

Very good. Now, that's teamwork!

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judycolella

Hahahahaha! OMG, that was awesome! Wow! Hahahaha! The cover is amazing, too! Great job! OMG! Hahahahaha!.....

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J.C. Laird

Do these things really just pop into your head?

I can't stop smiling. This should be set aside to be included in a children's book of parables, or some such thing.

Sure fits the bill of 'short and sweet.'

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mkidd6

Very cute, and clever story. Enjoyed the read and satisfying ending!

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jacki137

Thanks so much. I am happy you enjoyed it.

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jacki137

Thanks so much. I am happy you enjoyed it.

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sricci

This story is funny, whimsical, and has a GREAT twist. I'm a fan!

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indie23

I couldn't imagine a fly working up some trick with an alligator. The story was cut and funny, but I feel sorry for the frog.

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