Thanks evel-one for your comments. I dont think i will expand Darkness of Light. It already has an ending. If i find time i might write more of Sister Rebecca. it is the most read and downloaded of the 4 books, and sequels could easily be written. it's just finding time.

Hi, I hope all is well, You are certainly welcome, and thank you for being a friend on BookRix.

Hi, I hope all is well thank you for being a friend on BookRix.

I read it , that was great. The scene was very well set, A great description of awarkward sex. The only thing I thought that could be changed was the initiation of the encounter. To build up excitement this could be prolonged a little bit. I think she comes out and asks him too touch her ,a little too quiclky. I also liked the line about idle chit chat.
I was also curious about how she was actually feeling after the encounter. I thought the style of sex was also totally appropriate here.
Wow you can really churn the writing out.

wow, thanks for the comments, Mayumi. you answered perfectly what was good and bad points.i originally had in my mind that it would be a longer story, describing her feelings and emotions as she struggled with her beliefs and desires. i had an hour to spare this morning so i wrote it quickly, but i think it could be made into a longer story if i find time. and i agree with all your comments. i'll definitely take them on board. thanks again.
John

wow ,some people are gifted writers,amazing
do you have any favorite authors?