This is really good! You should definetly write more so I can see how it ends. I love the whole idea of the story and I think you are a great writer.
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This is really good! You should definetly write more so I can see how it ends. I love the whole idea of the story and I think you are a great writer.
C'était un jour parfait, et j'ai vraiment aimé ça! J'espère que vous continuerez avec ce livre, et m'avertir quand (si), que vous téléchargez. Criss
write more its soo good plez do write more
This story is great! I absoutely loved it! Also helped me practice my french. Althought i only understood words like you he she have a the and a few nouns. It is a great story, thought. I cant waite for more!
This story is great! I absoutely loved it! Also helped me practice my french. Althought i only understood words like you he she have a the and a few nouns. It is a great story, thought. I cant waite for more!
I really like the originality of the story. While it seems to have its basis in traditional stories, "Masked Love" adds a whole new dimension to the old fairy tales. However, it needs a whole lot of editing. Much of it sounds like someone is babbling, with little structure to keep the story together. There are many grammar and punctuation errors, which make it hard to decipher the author's meaning at times.
it was sety in this age of time but the world is set in old fashond mode so like the tuder times i think with all the new gadgets i think thats how she was saposed to set it and its not finished i dont think
It was a very interesting book for sure. I loved the flow of the story and how you felt the emotions of the main characters. I got a little confused by the changing of persons as to who I was reading whether either Bella or the Prince. Was sorry how it ended as it didnt satisfy my curiosity about who would marry the Prince or what happened to his brother and to Paris. I would have also liked to know more about what age it was... mehr anzeigen