love the book hope you write more. :) soooooooooooooooon.

good job!! cant wait to read more :)

more!!!! keep riting... its awesome...

great book so far cant wait till theres more, really want to know what happens

what does christopher want? will allen and ariel get to love each other forever?

I found it to be kind of rushed. And the punctuation isn't the best. But I like the storyline and plot. Not bad, juts a little more work and you will be amazing :) Don't give up.
Rate: 5/10

i love it

hurry up and finish

oh plz write more

I like the book so far I'm just worried now she about to except a marriage proposal from this guy and didn't she just say she loved allen and wanted to have kids to him aka the wolf. I dont know you have to keep me updated, because I really hope she is saying all this yes stuff to get away from the guy.