this is a good book make sure yawl read it everybody please read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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this is a good book make sure yawl read it everybody please read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love this book it was amazing is there a second book? if so let me know so i can read it thnx and keep up the good books <3 :)
Well, I can definitley see the improvements in your writing since the last time I read your work. It was definitley a lot more fluent and easier to read.
There's just a few minor errors in the way you aproached your dialogue! It's definitley a clever idea and different from any othe book, but you need to stay consistent. Multiple times in the book youd have...
NAME: blah blah, I said.
...The I said at the end of the sentence is... mehr anzeigen