the story is great i just wish you would write more sorry your not

i will say it was a lil wired but i kinda of liked it after reading it sucks your giving up on the book ;(

I was really hoping that you'll continue! ! Well, alright, I forgive u

Thank you for your comment. I have changed the formatting and style as well as included chapter dividers. But thanks for the encouragement. I really don't deserve it.
I'm also very sorry for ending the story here. But thank you for reading as far as you did. I really appreciate it. I will continue to write other stories, and even upload possibly in time.

yeah i know right the writing is too small, but the story i awsome upload soon

OMG tell me when you update!!!

Uhm....I love the story,but there's just one thing....

Can you change the font style??It's too narrow and small to read,makes my eyes and head hurt..I dunno if it's just me or anything...But if you can,please??

cool

finish please
!! <3

is there another part?