I love the book, please update me when you write more

I actually didn't have a certain age group in mind when I started writing this story. I'm sorry if you were dissapointed in some way about the cover, and I'm sorry that you assumed anything because of it. Like they say, Don't judge a book by it's cover.

I'm not sure what you mean by thank my friends, because I didn't ask anyone to vote for me. They voted because they simply liked my story. Also, I'm not sure what you mean by "You must have a good following of teenage friends and I am happy to see you found your nitch with them." because as you can tell, not all of my fans are teens. This story was written for anyones enjoyment and I apologize if it seems only to be geared towards teens.

Thank you for you words of encouragement, and I'll try to meet your standards next time as its obvious your not really pleased with my current work. :)

I think this book is geared to the younger female reader. Work on your paragraph's Reading one sentence at a time is tiresome as it the pink font. You must have a good following of teenage friends and I am happy to see you found your nitch with them. The cover of the book suggests a more adult appeal which is confusing. I think you write well and hope you choose subject material that appeals to all ages or at least broaden your appeal. I think you are capable of writing a very good novel one day and I will follow your progress. Best wishes on your making the top ten. Thank your friends.

The story or rather say drama about vampire is wonderful,it is full of suspense.It is just like of a person who is habitual of fabricating stories about him & prove his truth ,he fabricates another one.Any way I like the way you have narrated the stories.

Liked the idea. You blended the bar scene well with vampire needs. Realistic bar descriptions. Good flow to dialog. You are building the story well. Robynn

The story was good however the black back ground was tough to read along with the purple. My comment has nothing to do with the story. There were ,as many of us, has some spelling errors but not bad. I feel that you deserve a vote for your work./joeparente
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Comments appreciated!

I've only ever seen one episode of true blood, so I had no idea Sookie was a bargirl. Thank you for helping me.

~Chant'e

Although I'm trying to wean myself off vampire stories, this one reminds me of the "True Blood" series, about Sookie, also a bargirl.
With some correcting, I can see this going places.
Will wait to see what happens.
Laz

I think that I can't really give a true opinion of what I think about the book, seeing as it has just begun, but I am looking forward to reading the rest of it and then doing so.

Clueless vampire? I would like to see that- lol!

i was good please write more soon thanks !!!