Wichtiger Beitrag
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thank chu!
If you get a chance check out some of my poetry. Take care, Danny....
sorry if the chapters are so short! ill try to make them longer.
Thx for adding me to your friend list!!
I like the direction of the story. That cliff-hanger was brutal man,inform me of updates.
It'd be good if you broke the story into paragraphs. Also,the speech could be as separate paragraphs so as to know who is talking to who and the same going for the one answering. But hey,that's just me.
Ill try after school.