please let me know when more is added as i am really wanting to read more of the story

That was totally awesome. The way you described the different scenes made me want to keep reading. I did not stop reading until I finished reading so I enjoyed ur writing.

luv it this is the best awesome this is something different i hope u read my books and tell me wat u think of my books

i think its a good start :)

wow!!!!!!!!!

nice

finish the book i cant wate

good

I will give you my opinion once I get time to read it : )

nice one :) keep going