It the paranormal again(the league of vampires) and a good story. Tossed in a dream and more fantasy and it becomes difficult to separate where the dream state starts and where it end. A dream needs to be a dream and known to the reader immediately. Thrown is throne.

I finally got to sit down and read this and I'm SO happy that I did. I am already in love with Alec. I already have a picture of him in my head and can't wait for more!!! Great story

Again, you have an amazing imagination. I don't know how you sleep at night with all these ideas rolling around! LOL You are also improving, your writing is flowing better. Now, it's time for you to refine your writing.

You keep switching Point of View. You write very well in First Person, I envy you that. But you slip every now and then as in the first few paragraphs after your prologue.

Now, on the first page, 3rd paragraph,
"What if I fail them?" Take out 'I thought'. Being in first person we already know as readers that you are thinking to yourself.

4th paragraph, may I suggest the following rewrite to make the sentence flow better, 'If I hadn't gone through the bitter experiences of the past month,....'

Hope this helps and you understand that I admire your writing, just offering help. Robynn

One after another ,you are having a lot of imagination.It,s good to gain the imagination to higher level of thinking.

I can see another brilliant premise on the work here :) I can't comment much since this is just the beginning, but please do note me once you've added more. Again, I'm intrigued :)