I love the pictures.

I liked your story. It's always funny when the brother or sister goes psycho!

Keep on writing.

Bek :)

Nice book and keep up the good work

you have a unique fervor in your writing - you just need a proof partner - another very good story...Paula

congratulations,you are able to make it work.

Well here's to your unique writing! Keep up the good work!

Nice book and keep up the good work.

Raven

HI,
Truly a scary story....I know that it was only a dream...but what happened to your brother?
Apart from some spelling, and grammatical errors,( but no-one's perfect) it's very good.
Laz

I like your imaginative style! You have come so far in punctuation and sentence structure! Very impressed. Need to tighten up the flow of the scenes. Otherwise very good. Kept my interest and gave me goosebumps!

good job! nice horror story

Really spooky story...I haven't seen the movie, but I think I won't fancy seeing it now.

Enjoyed the horror. Thanks for the read :)