plz write more it's realy good

love the book plz add more

great story bu t you might want to reread it and fix things like tenses, grammar and words.

It's good but the spelling mistakes are making it hard to understand. Could you edit? maybe add more?

I loved this book it was so interesting;) I will have to reccomend it to others

hey everyone Im kinda stuck so have any ideas what the trick should be tell me leave a comment....

this book is so good it would be a crime not to write more!

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!Please finish it soon.

I hope you enjoy it and I'll try to finish it

DARN!! I WANT IT TO FINISH!! I REALLY LIKE IT SO FAR LOL