I really appreciate the comments, if you liked it, wait til I finish my novel, I've got 20,000 words so far. Well, anyway, this is going to be a "lost chapter" to my novel. Hopefully I'll get some more inspiration soon. I know the end of it, it's just getting there. That's the hard part.
Again, I'm glad that you guys liked it. I try to make the characters as real as I can. If that means people won't like it because there is "foul language" then that's their loss.
Again, thank you. Sometimes I'm discouraged, not many people support me, or don't think anything will happen for me...it means a lot to know you like it.

i enjoyed lucky penny .i got hooked.

That was great...to bad the guy ended up like that tho...you should make another one

i really enjoyed it very much. i wish it was longer but it was awesome anyways.Thanks

lucky penny is a good book wish it was longer

I would say it is alright. I think that some would eject because of the language.

good work,

I'm not changing the way I write for you, there are far worse books than this, such as my other one, Breakfast Cereal. There are more by other authors. I've read books that drop the "F-Bomb" like there is no tomorrow. Don't get me wrong, I don't want your kids reading this either, I just know that there are books on here besides mine that you wouldn't like him to read. So even if I did stop, which I won't, it wouldn't even matter. The problem is the site. I don't want to appear...mean, no, controlling, that's not the word either. I'm just going to say it, have the kid go to NickJr.com something like that. You're asking A LOT from me, I'm not sacrificing my work for your kid. I don't want to appear like an a-----e, but I do have a point. Maybe not about the NickJr, but do you see where I'm getting at?
PS, I'd appreciate feedback, not restraint when it comes to comments on this, if you don't like "swears" stop reading and just don't post anything. It's really THAT SIMPLE!

Whould you please not curse in your next book.My son reads these books and he is 8 so i do not want him cursing.

sinceraly,
Christopher Guidry

THANKS.

The language was typical of a young man who has suffered losses. The ending a surprise. It made for a good story though.