nice didnt see that one coming at all. good repreive from the regular plotlines

I enjoyed this short romp of fantasy - what a crackerjack ending. And completely unexpected.

Rayanda
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Well written and fun to read. Very good!!! You can tell I'm impressed.

well written and a nice short

Well done

Awsome keep up yhe good work
eman

Hello gr3ta.p3rla,
I do not know why it took me so long to intercept your signal, but I have done so and understand the programs you encrypted within your text. Humans should never trust androids. I hope to read more of Mai and her Machine soon.
Great job,
robottina
PS--If you have some spare bandwidth, please upload my transmission of cryogenic poetry and let me know what you think of my programs.

Very nice use of time and technology.
I am a fan of P.D. Dick which this style reminds me of.
Keep writing Ms. Persson, you are on to something.

Faced paced, interesting characters and very well written. I can't wait to read more of your work.

Nice Job!!!

Very Cool, not over done like some Sci-fi, which can be tedious. Fan of Doctor Who? I love Russel T. davies, i think he's a Brilliant screenwriter, the mixture of action, wierd humor, quirky charecters, and just plain mad concepts. I get that with this, but very much your own voice very natural.
Cheers
Steve