The pages did not download very easily. But, what little I did read, was very well written.

I enjoyed reading this tremendously. You got me right from the beginning. I hope that you will continue and make this into a full book. Great read!

Thank you -- Tash

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Short and light. Recommendable for a fast one.

This story was pretty good for the beginning of a chapter. Should continue on with it.
Do you plan on doing more?
Let me know and I'll read.
thanks, w.s

Your story was enjoyable, reminding me of Ray Bradbury in some ways.

Very engaging story. The novella pulls you in with enough intrigue and mystery to keep you hooked and the ending is reminiscent of an episode of the Twilight Zone.

Great job!

Did you know the german films of Ijon Tichy (after the collection of short stories The Star Diaries of Lem)?
Can't help me, but I allways see Mai as the female hologram...