impressing setting and dialogue with a natural flow of writing. I like your style.

This is a truly enchanting and captivating read,with the street scenes so alive you can see the vendors and characters as they move from page to page.

Hey, when's the next one coming out?!!! GOD, I LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!

Git into all the characters. Can't wait to read about the mission and the outcome! Excellent , descriptive, and all consuming when I was reading this works! Keep me updated on additions! :)

I can't tell you what a relief it is to actually find a well-written book on this site. This is fantastic. You should definately add more soon and shoot me a message when you do. :)

If you have time, could you check out my book "The Council Wars?" It's unfinished, but the theme is very similar to this one...

ryt iv made my desion...i am guna bite ya! how could u stop it ther? wen shes just about 2 headbutt Samuel! D: i mean come on! u better ryt more soon, or il..wait am i threatin u ryt now?? :/
Nah! LoL
but seriously lemme no wen uv updated.
P.S how can u say ur book isnt good?...becuz it isnt...its GREAT! it really is, iv nver read abook like this, n im lovin it. UPDATE SOON. cant make it any cleare thn tht! LoL

Nice

I'm not into that type of stuff,but your book is really interesting,and I'm kinda jealous of your way of writing=)
its lovely,your vocab,all of it!

Sorry about that. I keep forgetting I'm the only one who can see anything that's happening. I try my best to be descriptive, but I tend to forget things pretty easily. I'll try to add more detai las to what he looks like the next time I update it. Thanks for the advice!

I'm very impressed by your setting and your dialogue! Not everyone has such an ease with conversation. Also, I love your blend of fantasy with reality. Such an interesting concept... The only thing that caused me to pause during the reading was the boy's response when he was caught. I might be a pessimist, but it seemed almost too easy. Then again, I think her reaction afterwards resolved a lot of my indecision. Great job. :)