This is really good and really interesting. Can't wait to read more.

It a good start it bugged me that I didn't know the gender of the main character until few pages in, nothing wrong with that but it's good.
The cover is good but hard to read the red title on the background might want to change that, the cover is good though dont get me wrong.

There are few ways you could go with the story but all in all the story so far seems good

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Its a really interesting start, but it all depends on where you go with the story. I'm liking it so far though :)