Hey first off bit** I didn't ask you to read it and if you didn't like it then why even open your cock sucker to say something about the book, you say you couldn't even follow the book so who the HELL are you to sit there and talk crap. Your not my editor so FUC* OFF!!!!!

it was a good story.

Like all writers (including myself o_O) you have mistakes. But I love the story and the plot line. Good job!

I wanted to let you know I enjoyed the beginning of your book. I hope there is more in the future.

coooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

that was a good book u really should write a sequeal or something.

LUV IT

I enjoyed it, but your grammar disturbs me. "Fount" should be "Found". "Be for" should be "Before". Many more mistakes where made, please correct them.
Good book.
~Lillianthereader (Lillian Hudson)

Thank you, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I'll work on getting it to be longer.

THANK YOU
THE GENERAL HIMSELF.

nice book but too short