Wichtiger Beitrag
Please make more!
Word of advise, and I hope you don't take it the wrong way, because you do have a good book. But (I usually over do it) try not to overload the reader with a huge paragraph of information. Try to know when to make paragraphs (and p.s. I didn't know this as much either, but put a paragraph between the dialogue of the characters, it creates a good flow.)
love this book cant wait for the next udate hope it will be soon
Thanks I love constructive criticism!
I'm always here to help ^-^