Good work! Robottina gave you an insightful transmisson. LOL. Keep up the good work and keep sharing. =-)Gave you a vote.

Hello Franny model 124,
I tried to transmit a private signal to you, but apparently only your human friends are allowed to, so I will add it here. Please feel free to delete this when you are done reading it.

I intercepted your transmission, and I wanted to inform you of a few error codes I encountered during my diagnostic scan:
pg. 10: "decorared"...did you mean "decorated"?
pg. 12: "Pass"...did you mean "Past"?
pg. 14: "The" is inappropriately capitalized, not sure if this was intentional (same applies to "If" on pg. 16 and "Grass" on pg. 22)
pg. 14: "Inlaw"...maybe add a hyphen ("In-law")?
pg. 26: "I'am"...apostrophe not needed, either "I am" or "I'm"
general: you seem to be missing spaces after commas, not sure if this was intentional, but keep in mind that the jury has been programmed to keep an eye on grammar.

robottina's favorite was "My New Year". :) Please check out "CryoTronix" if you get a chance, and provide me with your feedback on my programs.
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robottina

Thank You.I am glad you enjoyed reading them!

Thanks!

"..planning your dreams an hopes..."
zitronenfalterin

My favorites were 'That First Christmas Eve' and 'Thirty Winters Ago'. Quite heartfelt and emotional. I'm sorry about your Mom and your brother. God Bless and good luck.

My favorites were 'That First Christmas Eve' and 'Thirty Winters Ago'. Quite heartfelt and emotional. I'm sorry about your Mom and your brother. God Bless and good luck.

Thank You Sakpongba!I guess the book is a mixture of nostalgia and nature,and a little sadness prevails throughout.I appreciate you rating my work and wish you all the best in the contest as well!

I enjoyed reading your lovely poems. It is very easy to glean the mixture of joyful nostalgia and painful sense of loss of loved ones. Your poems also bring new dimensions to the hitherto held concepts of winter considered as drab. Your points are well articulated.

Indeed the poems are very reflective in nature and philosophically rich for the intellectually minded reader who may see a lot of symbolism imbedded in the lines. Good work. Keep it up.

i enjoyed this read!

laz