I honestly don't believe that this was your first poem because this poem is amazing!!! :)

I actually got chills. Good job. =]

Thanks everyone for your beautiful comments, those are the reasons why I continue to write my best! I love you all <3

~Cheyenne X)

Haha thanks for the lovely comment, and your answer...lots of typing to many different people :D

To be honest: That's the first thing I've read on this website & I have to say you have a true rare talent <3 It somehow connected to how I feel about letting people hear me, but I'm too afraid.
I love it <3

That was a nice poem. I really liked it. Hope you continue with your writing. You have a very could chance at becoming professional.

my mom always said the best work comes from the worst feelings,, && i think youre poem is BEAUTIFUL even tho its based on sadness...
:D
keep up the good work,, wish I could do poetry :(

i loved it:)

the poem interesting but good it keeps you hook . Good job:)

Hey guys, thanks for the amazing comments you left! ^_^ To answer brooke672's question about my title- I'm not entirely sure how I came up with it! I just thought it fit what I was trying to get across...

~Cheyenne X)