Nice poetry, thought provoking and it made me ask some questions, I like that. Came across darkly and carried the whole way through. Most of the praise and criticism I could give you has been given already by the others. Write some more, poetry can be a very freeing form of self expression. I usually use it to work out problems in my life.
Beautiful poetry!! A few misspells, here and there. But very beautiful nonetheless. It was dark and had so much angst. The cover and the title are amazing! Great job! Keep on writing.
Blessings
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I love love love the title!! Very dark but poetic. How did u come up with it? Good job, keep writing!
I liked this a lot! Just one note: tongue was misspelled :D.
Could you check out some of my stories and leave feedback? Preferably on Triggy and Private Eye. Thanks, and good luck!!
