Your imagination worked overtime on this piece Pat. Letting us share in Rex's innermost thoughts made my own childhood wish of being invisible disappear.
The writing is incredible as always sir. Bravo.
Excellent writing skills. I easily became immersed in the life of this man and carried through the pages to reach the end. Very creative, and what an adventure!
Simply... amazing... I'm not sure there is an apt description, a fitting review, other than what kind of amazing imagination would think something like this up? Simply beautiful, in all its angst and heartache and utter despair. And lemons! Your writing never ceases to enthrall me, Pat.
Simply... amazing... I'm not sure there is an apt description, a fitting review, other than what kind of amazing imagination would think something like this up? Simply beautiful, in all its angst and heartache and utter despair. And lemons! Your writing never ceases to enthrall me, Pat.
Simply... amazing... I'm not sure there is an apt description, a fitting review, other than what kind of amazing imagination would think something like this up? Simply beautiful, in all its angst and heartache and utter despair. And lemons! Your writing never ceases to enthrall me, Pat.
This was a fantastic story about something that I'm sure we have all fantasized about a time or two, the ability to be invisble, but the dark side has been painted in this tale and it is not a pretty picture.
Great work.
I am at a loss...I so enjoyed this, I was completely, totally immersed in this tale. What a fun read. Hope there is more! Great writing.
Reading this story, it's impossible not to "see" Rex's life- Jasper's crazy parties, Andrea's beauty, Rex's fall into madness. You've done it again with your descriptive powers, Pat.
The sheer strangeness of the story is brilliant, if not a little confusing at times. Well done. :)
I especially liked the character. You did a good job of capturing his cynical Cali-trash artist attitude. Too bad he eventually started losing his mind much like Griffin and Sebastian Caine before him.
You know when a writer has talent, when you can’t stop reading his work. The pages flew by. Your writing entertains no matter what genre you write in. The cover grabbed my attention and the story aroused my curiosity and drew me in. It was totally believable.
In the beginning I didn’t care for Rex but as the story continued I could understand the struggle he was going through with his art. I wanted to learn more about the... mehr anzeigen