Please turn this into a longer story if possible. I loved how it ended and yet part of me is desperate to know more.

Wow. A different writing style. Scary. Beautiful and striking cover and a well told story.

Exceptional writing!

It was dark but very artistic. Enchanting work as always!

Not your usual love story...lol.

I'm not usually one for the vampire genre but this was really intriguing. Dribble, Drabble, whatever it's called...I liked it!

God wins books. You weaved a soul into being, taken, and given...very nice Patrick..p

It was very good! I kept wanting to read it. And the way you were able to link all the characters was amazing! Very good job!:)

i could really imagine myself being in the presence of each character. It gave me a mysterious feeling...in a good way.

i could really imagine myself being in the presence of each character. It gave me a mysterious feeling...in a good way.

Loved your three richly worded fantasy stories.