Defiantly makes you think. I think I like it.

hahaha that wsa great. I'm going to be laughing off and on all day now.

Quite a random description of creation from the viewpoint of a Catholic, read by a non-religious Jew - it still made me chuckle.

Or...thanks to all of you:)
I just need to mention...I was going to go into the "lower abdominal tract", but decided it might be a bit too much, lol. Glad you enjoyed it. I really appreciate the reads, comments, and hearts.

You aren't too far off from the actual, real-live, yet little known accurate Biblical account.

The humor is awesome! Still chuckling over the dialogue! Other stuff, too, but I don't want to give anything away.

Great story, Pat! Well-told, perfectly-written! 'D

Even though I'm a big believer in evolution, this story is too fun, Pat :) Wondering what their take would be on the intestines, lol.

Oh Pat... you are always so full of slightly heretical laughs. This is awesome. Keep the stories coming! :D

That was pretty cool. I like the mythological way you thought about the creation. Fills me with wonder. Gods with personalities musing over their ideas. Not in an instant, but having to figure it out a piece at a time.

Back to the drawing board. This is a comical view of creation. I'm not sure the lizard is amused, but God, no doubt, is chuckling.

Great read, Patrick....p;]

and interesting take on the creation on the first people. I liked it. I could see it happening this way.

Light hearted read, comical creation if you will. It was enjoyable.