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starlover412

What I just read was fantastic! I loved it! It was so emotion filled and it was just amazing!!! Very good job!! :)

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augustus

How Interesting!

I recently read a few poems in several award-winning journals. And guess what? I liked yours better.

That's kinda scary in a way. Your words spoke to me in a more meaningful way than those in the high-falutin' mags. Nice job, Patrick.

I have some poems in the oven right now. When they're done, I'll share them with you.
Regards,
Augustus.

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Gelöschter User

Whoa.... soooo good Patrick! Loved it!

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bluedragon

Sesistive, feelings laid down in lyric form to touch the soul, to empty the heart alread laid bare. Like open sores, these emotional word hurt deep down and yet bring the reader to full conclusion. Evelyn/Bluedragon

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Kalai

Spontaneous flowing of powerful feelings can rock years, minutes and seconds. Your words rock.

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lazarus67

Wow! Who is your muse? No doubt your finest. Can't believe it was written over such a short time span. Bravo Patrick.