Just finished reading it. YouTubed most of the music meantioned in the script for background effect. Yes, I too wondered about Zippo's name on the plaque. Is there a parte deux?
Well done my friend!
Really deserves an ovation AND vote.
I was impressed with the lisp - boy is that hard to write..This was easy to read and the dialogue gritty as needed...used the enlarge tool..p;]
I'm just amazed...amazed at the talent that comes from this site. This is a piece that is well written and professional. For me, screenplays aren't easy to read but the story line was able to hold me until the end. I wasn't a stretch to imagine it on the big screen.
