I hope there is more to this story!

THANK YOU! Thank you:)

This... I'm speechless... This was absolutely stunning. My mind is still reeling. So incredibly beautiful, with an innate quiet to the piece. I felt like I was in the presence of something ethereal, something completely foreign to this world. This was...amazing...

You can't tell me you are not an artist. Your lyrical prose is what draws me into your writing. A romance without really trying. The rhythm I love with just the right amount of cresendo with punctuating lines like, " we are only limited by th distance of our imagination etc"

And of course a bridge and one that you lead your readers to expect - a rainbow bridge of course! Imagery great and I am sure you already know that.

Your move from short like-"Thinking. Silence." to longer passages give your words the right touch as preview to a bigger idea.

If there is anything I would encourage you to llook at is page 14-15 just before the ending- somehow I felt a break, sorry I can't be more specific.

All to say there are so many bridges in life to cross and it seems a rainbow between the sea an stars would be a great one to follow. I enjoyed the read very much.

Finally someone who knows how to paint a picture. Nice job. I was blown away.

I liked all your details and references. It was almost as if you lived it yourself.

Well, for those, EJ, I must say thank you ten times! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much...much...much...:)

Wow! That was beautifully written-it just flowed! Great job!

A wonderful story and well written. I must say it kept me on edge. Good job!

Awesome very well written. On the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next. Oh my goodness, Patrick I love the story. :)

Certainly I have no words for your masterpiece. It is just breathtaking! I wont be surprised if you win the contest. There'll be no twist in that.

Hats off!
-Prakash