Very nicely done. I absolutley loved it! I read it all the way through without stop, great job :) (oh, and it has my vote)
-S.XIII

:) Thanks so much!
Actually, the original story I wrote many years ago was a knock-off of Lewis' two masterpieces, "The Screwtape Letters" and "The Great Divorce."
Heaven and Hell, and, yes, Purgatory and Limbo are always fascinating topics. I will get into Purgatory and Limbo in the next book:) We'll save the best for last.

At last! I finished reading your book. I was hesitant to read it because of your title. It seemed like a scary diary for me. LOL!

It’s good that this is only a fantasy, but you do have an imaginative mind. Actually, heaven, angels, demon, and satan were all mentioned in the Bible, except for hell. But hell was a terminology used by most religions to describe the lake of fire in Revelation 20:14 to 15 – “The lake of fire is the second death. If anyone’s name was not found written in the book of life, he was thrown into the lake of fire.”

From your story, you described a place what Catholics call as “purgatory.” They refer to it as a place between heaven and hell. Although, I don’t believe it; I’m not in the position to judge anybody. The most important thing is that we believe in God, and love still prevails in the end.

Enjoy your week!

Wow! I appreciate the read and your vote. Thank you:)

Thank you:) Your comments touched me, and the vote is encouraging:) :)

great story. Nicely done. U have my vote

Once again, a job well done!!! I love your creative mind and the way you brought your readers through the hell Terrance was undergoing. Keep up the great work!!! =-) Very good job, Patrick. Gave you a vote. best wishes...

You do me honor!
"...complex words in light brush strokes of genius." We should write a story beginning with that wonderfully lyrical phrase! Even though I doubt it actually applies in my case, lol. Thanks, dear:)

Awesome job Patrick! You remain the eternal romantic don't you! Love the concept, for awhile as I wandered through the wicked little festivals, I was wondering how he was going to get out. Loved the ending. You use such complex words in light brush strokes of genius. I vote happily. Robynn

Strange...yet I still loved it.
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