u should put pictrues up that would be cool to knw who you want them to look. this is really good. plz update soon and plz keep me updated with the news about this story:)

Hey i'm so sorry I was totally forgot today was my little man's birthday (brother I call him that) and I was planing it to make it special for him but I promise I will defiantly update and yeah people make mistakes and i'm glad i'm not the only one I promise I will try and make it better ;D

its total fine. i understand what u mean i did the same thing but its just little mistakes that can be fixed....i'm glad that your going to update today. hope its soon tho..:)

Aww thanks hun really appreciated it <3 I will update today <3

Yeah sorry about that it's my first time wrighting a story so I'm a newb lol but thanks for the help Dallas <3 if you don't understand something or want to know more just tell me lol thanks <3

this is really good just a little confussing tho. i under stand the stars. but could you maybe put " around the words they are saying. but its really good keep going..plz update soon