Every writer has a style. I find yours intense, fast flowing, laden with tension. You tease with hidden back story that is
just waiting to be revealed. Yet you allow just enough to be seen to keep the reader engaged. Scene descriptions are lean yet keep the reader in the moment. I can't explain it, but I love your style. The beginning of this story has me hooked. Robynn

Thank you!! More to come on this one soon I hope...

Yeaaaa...it's very good! Not much to question in the writing:) I like the extreme tension; the characters' feistiness--everything. Good start.

Thank you for reading, I will change the font right away, didn't realize this sorry.

The story is starting out really good but the type is so small it is almost too hard to read. But other than that I can't wait to read more.