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evangheline

Don't worry I understand, I'm at work too and it is hard to find time to read (or write) but I do thank you for reading part of it and for your positive feedback.

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gooduklady

I was not able to read all of your story due to time constraints at work. However, what I have read is really marvelous and totally unique. A very impressive piece of work indeed...and I look forward to finishing it soon. In the meantime, you definitely have my vote.

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Rgabel

The rumor of your talent is being spread throughout BookRix. You were mentioned to me by a dear friend and they were correct. You are a very talented writer! You have also picked a subject near and dear to my heart putting it in a beautiful, lyrical story. Your writing will touch many hearts. I vote! Robynn

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evangheline

Well this is such a pleasant surprise thank you so much for reading and God bless you!

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evangheline

Thank you so much for reading.. is its true I've been in this situation my self I was in an abusive marriage...but there is hope God can be such a wonderful rescuer its what He did for me..

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xmeli.j.nightlyx

This book is very beautiful. I am hooked by it, so much that I'm afraid to even finish reading it. I am touched by Raphael, but mostly about the girls situation in the beginning. I believe I have more than once been in such a situation where you feel you are giving way too much and receiving nothing in return and the pain gets stronger and stronger each time. But God is always there to pick you up. I am deeply in love with... mehr anzeigen

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evangheline

Thank you so much, yes I absolutely love CS Lewis, all his books are great! I love his style very much, the show don't tell is amazing, like for example in The Chronicles of Narnia, Aslan represents Jesus and you can tell that it's hinting towards that but never once does he say that but he makes you clearly understand what he is writing about.

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felixthecat

First, your prologue is perfect...The Bible and the venerable C.S. Lewis. Screwtape Letters?
I have not read the entire book...be assured I will. So far it is beyond good.

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evangheline

I'm honored that you would read it, it has a few flaws (this was only my first draft I'm currently working on re-writing and finding someone to help me with the editing) I really believe in this story and so I will work it until it's perfect :-) So anyone who would give honest critiques I will appreciate.

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ambersims

Really looking forward to reading! I just saved it to my favorites so I can come back to it whenever I want. Thanks for sharing it here on BookRix!

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evangheline

Thank you for reading, it means a lot to me, this book is written with much love in hope to encourage any person who is struggling, and I trully pray that reading this freedom will be born in people's hearts.

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