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A good backward journey through TIME...Old memories evoked in a smooth way with nice imagery and flow...
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A good backward journey through TIME...Old memories evoked in a smooth way with nice imagery and flow...
This book shows how the commonplace can hold the ultimate beauty. Your imagery and pace made things very easy to read, and your examination of memories makes things extremely interesting.
Great job, and thanks so much for the wonderful compliments. Have a good day!
I got around to reading your book this morning. I loved the story of going into the attic where you found the treasures. This is a peek at normal family life.
Thanks for the lovely comments about A Ticket to the Past. I will give a look to yours...keep smiling; it's like a glimpse into your soul. Elizabeth.
to your Ticket to the Past, Elizabeth!
Your ending was so poignant to the story of such wonderful memories with your family! Through the imagery, I pictured your babies growing up! Lovely! Petra :))
Your descriptive prowess makes reading your books, very easy and very enjoyable. Your words and images flow like a gently tamed river toward the ocean. The ocean in this case was my heart.
AND...I never knew that about hamsters...:) Cool!
You touch me with your responses; words reach the places that wait to be stroked...they often tender the heart as nothing else can. I thank you for your comments, and for this new friendship. I send you a smile. Elizabeth
Oh you bring back memories of my children when they were young. Now mine are young adults. What a touching story!
I am thrilled that my story touched you. I'll 'see' you after Christmas. Elizabeth (etelizabeth)
a tear, heart filled with joy, a laugh, an 'oh my', our lives woven about with memories to take us into our future... thanks for the wonderful reminder of our blessings we so easily push into the attic of our lives...Paula
Thanks Paula, for the delightful comments. I am so glad you connected with the story...families have histories that top fiction by a mile. Hope Christmas brings a special blessing to you in the new year. Elizabeth
Thanks Librarian, for the read and the vote, and the favorite entry. May Christmas morning find you with a smiling face...Elizabeth (etelizabeth)
Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".
The Librarian
I look forward to stepping into your mind via your work. Thanks for the read, and your delightful comments, you are a very astute young man, and it delights me to have you aboard. Wa do, Elizabeth, I'll get back to you about your work.