All the best Elizabeth. Valerie

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fiction writing contest "My Best Fiction".

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One of the few stories I did not want to end. You painted a detailed portrait of a woman who had come to the end of her life with senility her only friend. It was disturbing yet truthful. I felt as though I were in the room with her and could see every detail. You have a wonderful way of describing people and their surroundings. I will take a tip from you in that regard in my own writing. If you enter this, of course I will vote for it. All the best. Valerie

Finally, a piece that didn't set off the inner teacher. Very nice and well done. I thoroughly enjoyed the simple pleasure of it.

Please do read White Down" if time permits. It is a look at life in a humorous way that will make you laugh [I hope]. If it does, and you like it, your vote would be appreciated./Joe

I have read this book about a week ago and left you comments. To re-cap: I thought it was the most thought provoking story I had read. I truly enjoyed it. I read it again and thought you should have a star./Bravo./Joe

Wow! This story moved me deeply. I could picture the scenes vividly and felt I was in the story. You are a very talented writer and I hope you post another one of your stories. Like joeparente said if you sign up for a contest you have my full vote.

I have to honestly tell you that this story [that did not seem like a STORY] was absolutely moving to me. It is the best thing I have read on bookrix. you will need to promote this one. You also have to make the printing larger. At the beginning the descriptions were a little tiresome but you grabbed me with this book as it progressed. I will give a STAR if you enter this in the next contest!!./Joe