I loved it! Especially the fighting and vision scenes. Your descriptions are amazing, at times I felt like I was right there in that particular scene. All in all, it was a really good read.
Keep writing and never stop!

you should write a sequel!!the book was very good

I enjoyed this book very much :)
But you need to work on a few spelling mistakes and the grammar and paragraphs

i love this book you should make a second book

YES IT SHOULD HAVE A SEQUEL

i really enjoyed this book you must make another one :)

don't be mad at me please! lol, I assure you that I didn't kill off the main Character. I will update soon!

I LOVE THIS BOOK!! but it is sad for her to have to die but still a brilliant book.

wow! what a switch up. i was not expecting everyone to die off like that. but now you have me even more into the book. keep up that awesome work:)

OMG!!! this is soo good!!! Please write more soon. I really want to know what happens.