I felt I was right there during the whole trek with the Beaver family as they make their journey in the bitter cold to get help for their baby son. The end has an emotional touch. Good luck with the contest. I voted for you.

I knew this was one I didn't want to pass up. A very good story with a sad fate. But that's reality. Life isn't fair. I gave you a vote. DOn't forget to drop by mine: Sailing Through Time. Hope you like it.

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Wonderful! I was expecting some nice creation from you. Ya!and here it is. I have voted for you. There is no doubt about your writing skills. You always come up with great ideas and thoughts and this time also you have showed us that you are one of the good writers on Bookrix. Keep it up! Good luck for this contest!

Very well written--convincing dialog/characters...flowed along with wonderful visual effects and believable,very touching emotions. Great job.