I like it a lot. The story is really original. Please write more!! I wanna know what happens!!
OMG Did I just use the word 'wanna'??
Better go and wash my brain.
C ya!
P.s. I like Luke. He's cool

To each their own, I guess. But to be fair, Renesmée rejected Jacob from the get-go. I don't know how you misread those signals...

i dont like the book becaues the story isnt good. Renessmee responded good to jacob at the begining why is she rejecting him now i really hat the book

I like where you're going with this. It is nice to see how many different ways this Saga could actually go. Let me know when you add more please : )

It is really good so far. I hope you keep writing more of it.

It is really good so far. I hope you keep writing more of it.

I loved it! Hope you write more!!! Honestly I'm not really into the whole twilight thing, but it's an awesome storyline! I always wondered what would happen if Jacob was rejected.

Due to lack of time I usually avoid serials or unfinished work, but I am glad that I broke my rule on this occasion.
I am intrigued to find out how the story will span out, and the twists & turns of this story.
Please keep me posted when you post more of this story, & other works.
Chris

This was a pretty good start. I'm not a Twilight fan like my sister, but I would like to read more.

The only thing I can see that you could improve about your writing is to take off and invent your own characters and story line. Your grasp of the English language and writing structure is sound. I know the rage is Twilight, but eventually we need a new "Twilight", something as different as Twilight and Harry Potter were. Fresh and exciting. Reach deep inside yourself and create a new world for us to experience in your clean writing style. Robynn