You're TWELVE????!!!!! Dang, girl, you write better than some adults I know! Definitely huge talent here! And I really like how you imagined Renesmee and her dealings with Jacob. I'm also intrigued by Luke's mother's reaction to her. If you don't keep going with this, I'll be very, very disappointed - can't wait to read more!

it was so good im starting to like luke

Ive read all the Twilight books and I'd have to say that I thought your story was hilarious and I think that you should finish it. A few suggestions though, if this is supposed to be 17 years into the future try to come up with something a bit more creative for them to play their movies on, we all know that if this world does have even 10 good years left that DVD players will probably be a thing of the past.

Overall I thought it was a good read.

it's a very interesting story.keep writing more please.

GREAT WRITING!!!
Can wait to read more.

GREAT WRITING!!!
Can wait to read more.

this story was really good cant wait for more

I thought your book was very well written. Please continue. Serena

You write absolutely well for 12 year old. I'm so envious. Plus the way you began this story actually leaves you wanting more. I rarely read Twilight fics and the one that caught my attention was "Curtain Call" from na faeria lilakoi kegan and I will definitely yours now. It's a great twist to the original story. Let me know when you write more.

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This is very good hope you continue story