I loved the second story. Hehehe, could make for a cool novel.

I love the tone of the stories, the third one in-particular. Sherry

I am new to this group and have written all my life, but as a scientist. Now I try to put words together in an art form. Fiction or literature are to me an art form in the narrative. When I write I try to create a vivid image in the mind of the reader of some aspect of reality. My critique of Dabbles is that it is too pretty and has a cryptic element to it that is not literal.... I think if we don't boil over the pot, nothing creative will come from such a group.

*hugs*
done!

Just noticed an error in number three.

"Had emascualted him off." Incorrect grammar and should be "of". Also, on your blurb, you mis-spelled "people" - go back and fix. xxx

so here is my vote.
xxxx

Paula,Koyel,Kathy and Patrick for the wonderful feedback...
This is why Bookrix is what it is i suppose,a great enthusiasm for writers because,you get good genuine feedback for your work.thank you all.

You definitely know how to play with words. Excellent writing!
regards,
Koyel

less certainly can be more - by the numbers, enjoyed them! Kept it.

i shall write a dozen more after that vote of confidence my dear friend!...took me the greater part of today to get together these 300 words!
amazing how less must be more..and yes cheers to us ...let the games begin!