great job and reading the comments, it seems that your artist is in tune with your words. I look forward each complete package!...Paula

for the re-read and wonderful input..and though i did make the grammatical corrections suggested by Val,the cover art and background art is done by a very dear friend who delights in all things art.i would like to thank him for the wonderful effort he puts into discovering lovely art to go with my work..thanks faisal.

aww thank you Val ,means a lot...have made the nescessary corrections..thnks

very heartening ,is what i can say about your feedback my dear.so thanks again!

Apart from a few minor punctuation errors (i.e., Sables' -- should be Sable's) - go back and fix them -- you are turning out to be one of my very favorite writers. I adore your poetry and I love this story. I am a big fan and give you my vote. Valerie