I read your book and was truly moved by it. I am sorry that you had to go through so much torture. You must have lived this tragedy to be able to write like that. If not, you made me believe and that IS the art!!
Joe Parente
this is a heartwrenching story, beatifully crafted. Bravo
I am very flattered by your kind words. I find your tales to be wonderfully compelling and beautifully written! I have not read all of your entries as of yet, but I will get to them all. Good luck in the contest and God bless you. :-)
Congratulations to you too, Donna. You deserved to win. I mean that.
j.sin
I'm just glad the whole thing is over. God Bless :-)
An all to familiar theme written with compassion, Donna! Petra :)
Thank you for your kind words. God Bless You
Congrtatulations on your winning entry!
God Bless,
Tyrone
Thank you Tyrone. God Bless You
ooo... right where it hurts. this story shook me like nothing else... i hope you get more votes. :)
This is a very remarkable story. I can feel the lump in my thoat kicking up tears to well in my eyes.
The plot of the story was weaved masterfully around very intriquing conflicts. Both the internal and external conflicts found an equilibrium in the gripping suspense. The climax was spontanous and unexpected. A very good story.
Another star from me to join the array of STARS IN THE MILKY WAY.
I enjoyed this story. I think it was very well written.
I voted for this one! Hope you win!
I hope to post other works at a later date. I will leave the poetry to the masters, such as you. Good luck in the contest.