Wonderful story, keep up the good work.

I'm glad you liked it. I almost cried myself when I wrote it. Good to hear from you.

i voted--
i have to say i am mixed-- sad-- but very good writing--- good nana

Thank you so much for taking a look. I'm very pleased you enjoyed the story.

Beautiful, touching, poignant, heartbreaking. Well done.

Thank you for taking a look at my story. I'm glad you like the ending. I've had a couple people read it who wanted more, but I like leaving it this way. A question asked at the beginning, the question answered at the end. One does tend to try to second guess yourself though, so thank you again. I shall keep it as is. :-)

...to Clint, and all of the very real thinking around that whole segment of the book :)
This story is beautiful in every way. The flow, characterization...everything.
The ending is very heart-wrenching, but I do like the way you've left a little bit of that up to the reader (don't want to give too much away).
Great job!

This story is great and thought provoking. I loved the characterisation and the plot. Nice job!

Thank you! I am glad you liked it.

Very Good