Thank you. I can't say how much it means to me that people are enjoying this story. I used my own mother as an example, she is Stella and I know she would do anything for her grandkids. Thanks for reading and your vote of confidence.
Wonderful story, well told. This has humour, poignancy, sadness, and so much more. It depicts so well the love of a grandmother for her grandchild. Well done.
I'm glad you liked it. It is so much fun creating these stories and so satisfying when I hear people are enjoying reading them. Thanks for taking a look.
I thought this was a great story. It had a nice flow to it, and kept me impatiently waiting to flip the page. Thanks for sharing this with me. Still all I can say is WOW......
You were right about the title. I looked it up on the internet and wouldn't you know I found it both ways. I believe dropping the d is correct so thank you very much. Outside eyes are always nice for catching little details like that.
moving story.
Need to check spelling of movie title
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1205489/
Also some punctuation correction needed for ease of reading.
Too many commas. shorter sentences would be better.
Overuse of small superfluous words as adjectives. Needs editing.
But good depiction of the old woman.
Worthy effort-good luck. I gave you a vote
1 John 3:16
By this we know love, because He laid down His life for us. And we also ought to lay down our lives for the brethren.
Excellent example to live by and an inspirational,well written story.
God bless,
Tyrone
Thank you for reading my story and I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. I was hoping people would relate to Stella and the courageous action it took to save her grandson. I choose to believe that most people are good at heart and would do exactly the same thing if in her situation.... mehr anzeigen
What an ending! Excellent job!
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I'm always pleased when someone can get enjoyment out of something I've written. Thanks a million for taking a look.
Dee
Brought a tear to my eye. A touchy and deeply moving tale. Keep up the good work. Best wishes and good luck! Thanks for being my right hand.
CAV LASTER
Hey Carmen,
Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for inviting me to this site. I might not have ever found it, or had the courage to put up one of my stories without you.
Dee
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.