thank you so much!! I'll make sure to read your short story over the weekend!

We all have first loves, in-between loves, and wonder where they are? Beautifully expressed, Debs! I had to give you a vote considering I'm in the contest as well!

here.....have a vote too...:)

I'm not sure where Matt is now...if he ever got to fly the "big ones", but you certainly show the signs of following your own dream of becoming a writer.
You got a star from me Deb...good luck.

I know I've already thanked you all... but, gosh, your comments really made my day!

Thank you ever so much!
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I love this story. I must tell you I am pregnant and emotional and I just teared up like baby. Happy tears of course. It was so beautiful and well written. I felt the emotion in the story. I love it is what I am trying to say. thumbs up

I enjoyed this. The words were written from the heart. Keep writing. You have a gift. =-)

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story writing contest "Travel Stories".

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lovely story brought a tear to my eye