Very well described - this next part was worth the wait. Your writing is excellent and I seriously hope you add more soon!

I should have chapter two up shortly once I proof-read it!

seems like a good book please keep going x

I appreciate the feedback immensely! :) I'm hoping to have chapter two up in the next couple of days!

I love your descriptions, and the way you begin the conflict even before the conflict begins. Nicely done - look forward to reading more!